The Whole time she walked with her child in her arms the only thing that worried her was her son’s feature.
It should be here 'was her son’s future’.
When the young artist returned to his village, his family held a festive dinner on it’s lawn to celebrate his triumpant homecoming.
The correct spelling should be ‘triumphant’.
Had she not suppressed all the details of her Company’s project her Company would have bagged the contract.
The word suppressed should be replaced by revealed or leaked in the sentence.
She trusted Mira with all her heart and thus handled over her life’s savings to her instantly.
It should be ‘handed over’ which means the act of moving power or responsibility from one person to another.
Poor posture can lead to muscular problems in later life.
The pump shut off as a result of a mechenical failure.
The correct spelling is : mechanical.
The Principal gave a very pompous spech about 'The portals of learning'.
The correct spelling is : speech.
The accomodation though was in a good locality the construction work was not good